An American film actor once said Tomorrow is important and precious Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present Do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.”Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present.

Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that thinking about the future is more important than focusing on the present. I agree entirely with the statement that tomorrow is the most important think in life.

Thinking about the future can help people to hold positive attitude towards their lives. People, especially adults who pay more attention on the present, usually surrounding with unfinished tasks or variety of undone bills, under this pressure people may lose their temper easily and eventually leads to mental disease someday. If people want ignore these problems,then they should prepare blue plans for light future. Because of these plans, they can work enthusiastically and energetically. Once people plan for their future and clearly know what they really want to do, they will not feel confused anymore and it becomes easier to find the goal of life to live and work. Thus, I believe that people can work more effectively if they plan for short-term goals to meet.

Planning plays a significant role in multinational's and government's administration. It is necessary for leaders to think for a long-term sight. This is likely to help authorities to predict problems they may face someday in future and taking precautionary measures to handle these risk in advance. For instance, many governments are investing on producing more environmental-friendly products and preserving the stock of fuels, to make sure the development when fossil fuels are about to end in decades. When the crisis of energies come true, these government with future sight are likely to be less shocked compare to other governments who focus on temporary benefits. I, personally, will choose to focus on planning and not wasting time for plans.

To pen down, I believe that plans are of little importance but planning is essential. A clear vision and planning gives individuals and people a tremendous feeling of confidence and personal power.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (37 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
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Message: Did you mean 'this government' or 'these governments'?
Suggestion: this government; these governments
... When the crisis of energies come true, these government with future sight are likely to be less...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, then, thus, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25081433225 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94359109562 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3742016361 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168400381026 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596348507941 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638224964683 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125008660303 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936769930307 0.056905535591 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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