The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that the present higher education system does not help student to gain an acquired skill set which is needed to become successful in life. A loin’s share of society favors it however the rest go averse it. The following paragraph would shed some light on my view points.
I agree to the statement that current education system is not helping much to gain the qualities and skill set required to become successful. To begin with the grading system, intelligence can not be measured with good marks or grades but with the use of brain. For example, Albert Einstein and few other famous and successful personalities had dropped out from their colleges and still were able to achieve a lot in their lives.
Furthermore, schooling can provide you degrees and certificates but not the mantra for success, for that everyone has to struggle on his own. To get a better job we definitely need degrees from a reputed colleges or universities. However, to start a business we should have a vision of future which has not been taught anywhere in the education system.
Lastly, education system which is in practice in present has been developed and invented years ago. However, the world has drastically changing since then, and no one tried to upgrade the education system. Therefore, I believe the curriculum we are following is outdated and is not of enough to use for present and future generations. For instance, being in IT we have felt that the technologies and languages being used presently in industry is very much different or advanced than what we had been taught in our engineering.
To conclude, considering all the points mentioned above a weak education system cannot help to develop a successful career instead the presence of an intellectual mind. Education system does give you a nourishment but not the acquired skill set you required to become successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'college'?
Suggestion: college
... definitely need degrees from a reputed colleges or universities. However, to start a bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00306748466 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79426302092 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.161119949 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.733333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141211002868 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449163344777 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520671688188 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794900541482 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449803535611 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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