The graph shows the percentage of Internet users in three countries from 1999 to 2009

Essay topics:

The graph shows the percentage of Internet users in three countries from 1999 to 2009.

The line graph represents the comparison of the percentage of people who used the Internet in three particular countries, namely the USA, Canada, and Mexico in ten consecutive years beginning from 1999.
At the first glance, it is clear that the proportion of the population in all three given countries had a tendency to go upward over the years. In general, the greater number of Internet users appeared to be in the USA and Canada compared to Mexico in which fewer citizens had access to the Internet.
In 1999, the USA witnessed the highest point of Internet users' percentage which was about 20%, followed by Canada and Mexico with 10% and 5% respectively. In the middle of the above period (2005), people of the two countries, Canada and the USA, who are in use of the Internet increased to approximately 70%. Meanwhile, the figure for Mexico was still around 25%.
By 2009, the number of Canadian users took over the proportion and peaked at the highest point of all three countries with almost 100% of the population as opposed to nearly 80% of Americans and just about 40% of Mexicans.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd Mexico with 10% and 5% respectively. In the middle of the above period 2005, pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, still, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76315789474 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60900316346 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542105263158 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3670136915 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.285714286 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302699825548 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120200402562 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808867739625 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173030498826 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523669076771 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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