planning for the lesure time
Nowadays world population is rising,their reqires also incrising.People want to do everything but almost do not have enough time for it. As a matter of fact, spare time is loosing in our life.Therefore, when we go to bed we carefully think and plan our next day and it continues day in and day out. we wake up recollect our checklist with things to do and in a few minutes we are already in a car on our way to the office. often people do not have time for themselves. So when people some spare time they want to use it wisely. Some people always plan all activities in free time very clearly. However others do not make any plans.I focus on both cases and present my opinion following point.
From one side,not any making plans can bring to us much benifits. For instants,they do everything what they want.First of all, person can relax watching TV, listening to music or observe the flowers in bloom from the window. As for me, I great pasion is that, observing the outside from my room's window and contemplate about my life.I think it is good way to loose the stress and tension and to leave some troubles and woories in my life.
From other side,cereful planning can bring much benifits too.First of all,one wants to travel. However,traveling requires some planning to be made. For example,one most likely will need a hotel room.At that stage, one need reservation and should book beforehand. Second of all, planning activities can help us which to spend free time as we like. For exaple, If I want to play tennis on weekend I will certanly make a resolution for a court. By this attempt, we can safe our time. Personally, I prefer to make plans for my free time. Beause I do not like to waste.To sum up,planning activities is good and can bring much benificial way. Sometimes, I do not make any plans for my flexcible time. Because unexpectly events are good things too.
Sentence: As for me, I great pasion is that, observing the outside from my room's window and contemplate about my life.I think it is good way to loose the stress and tension and to leave some troubles and woories in my life.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to I and great
Sentence: Because unexpectly events are good things too.
Description: The fragment Because unexpectly events is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace unexpectly with adjective
Sentence: Nowadays world population is rising,their reqires also incrising.People want to do everything but almost do not have enough time for it.
Error: reqires Suggestion: requires
Error: incrising Suggestion: increasing
Sentence: From one side,not any making plans can bring to us much benifits.
Error: benifits Suggestion: benefits
Sentence: As for me, I great pasion is that, observing the outside from my room's window and contemplate about my life.I think it is good way to loose the stress and tension and to leave some troubles and woories in my life.
Error: pasion Suggestion: passion
Error: woories Suggestion: worries
Sentence: From other side,cereful planning can bring much benifits too.First of all,one wants to travel.
Error: benifits Suggestion: benefits
Error: cereful Suggestion: careful
Sentence: For exaple, If I want to play tennis on weekend I will certanly make a resolution for a court.
Error: exaple Suggestion: example
Error: certanly Suggestion: certainly
Sentence: Beause I do not like to waste.To sum up,planning activities is good and can bring much benificial way.
Error: benificial Suggestion: beneficial
Sentence: Sometimes, I do not make any plans for my flexcible time.
Error: flexcible Suggestion: flexible
Sentence: Because unexpectly events are good things too.
Error: unexpectly Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
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No. of Words: 352 350
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No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.236 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.276 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.561 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.453 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
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