Why Do You Come To Pare To Learn English?

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Why Do You Come To Pare To Learn English?

English lesson becomes necessity for all people in the world, not only the country that use English as their mother language but also the other country, so English lesson is very important for many people in the world. As consequence, English lesson becomes very important necessary, so it pushes me up to learn English more. I really want to be good in English lesson so I can speak English in excellent fluency, get scholarship in the other country, and make my parents proud of me. Hence, I have a big problem in English lesson so I need learning English in Pare, because I heard pare is a good place for learning English.

Firstly, many people in my environment are good when they were talking in English language that makes me feel so envy to them. People who can speak English in excellent fluency look so great. Speaking in English is also become one of requirement necessary for entering a company, and then if the company accepted us in sometimes the chairperson asks to us to be good in presentation. Wherever you are, you will always need it.

Secondly, English lesson is one of requirement for entering a scholarship in the other country. If we want to continue study in the other country, our English lesson is must good, so we have to prepare it well. I have a big problem in English lesson, for the example I cannot writing with good grammar, speaking English well, get good score for English test, and other, so I went to pare to learn English.

Thirdly, this is my big reason i come to pare to learn English. I want to make my parents proud of me. My parents really admire people who can speak English in excellent fluency. My parents assume that people who full of talent of English is very great. When I was saying to my parents that I want to learn English in pare, my parents were very happy to hear that, so I do not want to disappoint them.

I think just that all my reason come to pare. I hope just in 2 weeks can make me be better than before arrived here.

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Sentence: People who can speak English in excellent fluency look so great.
Description: The fragment fluency look so is rare

Sentence: I have a big problem in English lesson, for the example I cannot writing with good grammar, speaking English well, get good score for English test, and other, so I went to pare to learn English.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and writing

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No. of Different Words: 144 200

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Score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 365 350
No. of Characters: 1573 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.371 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.31 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.355 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.689 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.434 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.63 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.263 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5