Why do you come to Pare to learn English?
English is international language. Many people want be able to fluent speaker of English. But not all the people can it, one of them is me. When I was graduating from College, I felt need to learn English. I really want be able to understand and speaks English in excellent fluency, but I have problems, that problems are lack of vocabulary and can’t good speak English. From that, I try to look for place course of English. Finally, my friend recommended in Pare, because in Pare have many place course which provide the good facility and economical. After I know about that, I felt more spirit and sure to get my dream. I have many dreams, my dream is fluent speaks English, get high score IELTS, and continue to study in abroad College.
Since was graduating from College, I’m realize the English is important language. With English, we can get much knowledge, because many book and information like article in online media used text English. For the example, my major have many literature used English more than used Indonesia language. if we can it, we can have open our eye more broad.
If I can speak English, I will join the program to study IELTS. I wish after take the program, I will get to change in English until I have brave to follow the program test of IELTS. Because, if we want continue study to abroad College, we need high score. So I must study hard to get it.
I sure, some day I can apply for some College in Germany. The College is Bauhouse. Bauhouse is the best older University of Architecture in world. I want study in there to look for more knowledge to be profesional Architect.
I will not afraid what be next time, because I have dream. If we have a dream, we have to study hard to get it. I must fight to get my dream. So, I will take spending time wisely in there, and study hard to get my dream.
English is international language.
English is an international language.
Sentence: Many people want be able to fluent speaker of English.
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Sentence: I really want be able to understand and speaks English in excellent fluency, but I have problems, that problems are lack of vocabulary and can't good speak English.
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Sentence: For the example, my major have many literature used English more than used Indonesia language. if we can it, we can have open our eye more broad.
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Sentence: I wish after take the program, I will get to change in English until I have brave to follow the program test of IELTS.
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Sentence: I want study in there to look for more knowledge to be profesional Architect.
Error: profesional Suggestion: professional
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