The residents of Yougtown received a petition from an environmental protection group protesting the Smith Corporation's desire to build a hotel complex on a wildlife sanctuary. The sanctuary is noted as being essential to the survival of 300 bird species and the development of the hotel could prove disasterous to these species. Although the snippet of the petition notes an important argument, further justification is needed to determine the true harm the hotel development would cause on the bird species. Additional studies should also be conducted to provide evidence that the hotel will or wil...
Subscribe as testbig VIP readers and get unlimited access to essays on the top list.
Votes
Essay Categories
Sentence: The petition takes the strong stance that their is no benefit for the community from the sale to Smith Corporation; however, the only evidence they provide on this position is that the small hotel will hurt the tourist economy the community thrives on.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Refer to their and is
Sentence: The sanctuary is noted as being essential to the survival of 300 bird species and the development of the hotel could prove disasterous to these species.
Error: disasterous Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The environmental protection group notes that the the Smith Corporation is seaking to purchase a small percentage of the Yougtown Wildlife Preserve to build a small hotel.
Error: seaking Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 674 350
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 674 350
No. of Characters: 3452 1500
No. of Different Words: 234 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.095 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.122 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.839 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 242 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 205 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 155 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 94 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.963 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.829 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.339 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.499 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.108 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5