"The best way to reverse Aura Cosmetic's recent decline in profitability is to require each new employee in Aura's sales division to enroll in the popular SureSale seminar. After all, apparel company DressRite recently incorporated SureSale's week-long seminar into its training program for all new retail sales staff, and DressRite's total retail sales have increased dramatically since then. Besides, the SureSale sales system has been widely adopted among the nation's twenty largest companies."
Identify the argument's stated and/or unstated assumptions, explain how the argument depends on them, and discuss what the implications might be if those assumptions prove unwarranted.
The author mentions the roll of Sure sale seminar in improving the sales in some company. However, this argument has lots of flawed. Such as there is no evidence on how this seminar will boost the sales, twenty company with different background use one application and become successful this doesn’t mean the next company who use this product will also productive, and the meaning of decline and increase is not mentioned.
Firstly, the relation between the Sure sale seminar and productivity of the company does not mention. Perhaps some age group like the young become interested in Cosmetics because of the previous advertising and they buy it now. So, having spent a huge amount of time and effort, company gain users of their product. The comparing to a different company with not the same product is not a sensible. Since every company has pros and cons in management and other criteria for themselves. As a case in point, Apple Company is a well-known in the digital market, however, Golrang sales shampoo. They must not compare to each other. In some season, people reluctant to buy the new electronic devices. Because the high quality of the previous one or the lower quality of the product compared to other product of the company. But they always need soap and shampoo. These problems won’t solve with some seminar. So before using some sort of seminar, dean of the company should be understood a number of reasons why some customer dislikes their state-of-art product.
Secondly, they just mention their sales decrease. More importantly how they figure it out. There should be some statistics to show this fact. Moreover, their source may not reliable enough. Or even the people use the cosmetic product just in one season annually. There are diverse factors in order to change sales rates, such as vacation, wages and spare time. Vacation is so valuable for families who parents both have a permanent job, hence, they will more and more reliable to shopping instead of craft. Not just this factor but also wage has a consequently affect on shopping. As a vivid example, the poor who suffer from the source of a financial problem cannot afford to buy stuff. So as much as the people suffer from poverty, they spend less and less on the cosmetic product.
In conclusion, there are a number of reasons that lead to boost in sales of the product like families life condition. And there is not a clear and transparent relationship between sales seminars and improving this sales rate. Generally, according to aforesaid this gaining some sort of instruction for nowaday’s shopping is impossible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('consequently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('affect') instead of another adjective.
... Not just this factor but also wage has a consequently affect on shopping. As a vivid example, the po...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...factor but also wage has a consequently affect on shopping. As a vivid example, the poor ...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...d to boost in sales of the product like families life condition. And there is not a clea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 439.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99316628702 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60198700862 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 204.123752495 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507972665148 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 19.7664670659 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.477250382 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2857142857 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6785714286 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82142857143 5.70786347227 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113485692188 0.218282227539 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307241289105 0.0743258471296 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343404204142 0.0701772020484 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802665594164 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332061355001 0.0628817314937 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.3799401198 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 98.500998004 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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