The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Modern day society is already competitive enough, every now and then we get to read that markets have gone competitive than ever. Most of the youth dreams of making an impact, and they are self declared natural leaders. The current generation has a profound understanding of competition they are going to face. Curriculum in schools are designed so, that they cover most aspects of life, including the knowledge of consistent pressure of getting replaced by more competitive contenders. What is needed to be thought now, is a lesson of cooperation. There are several ways in which the society will benefit from instillation of co-operative attitude in today's youth.
To begin with, as mentioned earlier that the new generation already has enough understanding of competition, you can see this in their curriculum, the activities they do at schools and the way they look at their own results. There is no more comparing of exact marks and percentage, yet we get to read the news of depressed students because of their comparatively lower grades. This internet generation has Google Gyan and they know what is good for them and what is not. They need to be taught of the melody of coexistence. They need to know how good it feels to help fellow students. To be there for friends when they need you.
Moreover, leadership is not always about competitiveness, it is more about the skillful combination of cooperation and competition. Sagacious leaders are best in using both skills at the same time. Being competitive always can give rise to negative attitude, where one is more disturbed by success of others, than self appraisal. This kind of attitude sets one on path of self destruction. Take for an example, many consistently performing students take up means of cheating in exams only to get better marks than their specific friends.
Thirdly, Cooperation is far more important than considered. Take for instance, we all come across teenagers who have alacrity to fight. They take stand against the systems they do not completely understand. Sometimes they tend to blame others for their own faults. A sense of cooperation here, will help them in understanding how things work together. It makes them realise that a mistakes responsibility is equally their's as it is of others.
However, being competitive is fundamental need for success. If one lacks this ability, than it is of serious concern that
competitiveness be instilled in him. Without competitive attitude originality is subjected to loss. It inspires one to give best and set higher goals. Competitiveness is great when it promotes constructive thinking.
Conclusively, being able to cooperate while being competitive is what this world needs right now. Nobody likes a credit taker, egotist, who cares about nothing but his own success. Therefore, it is of utmost importance that working with cooperation should be thought to today's youth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... society is already competitive enough, every now and then we get to read that markets have gone c...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mistakes'' or 'mistake's'?
Suggestion: mistakes'; mistake's
... together. It makes them realise that a mistakes responsibility is equally theirs as it ...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...for success. If one lacks this ability, than it is of serious concern that competi...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lity, than it is of serious concern that competitiveness be instilled in him. Wit...
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Line 10, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be instilled in him. Without competitive attitude originality is subjected to los...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.6327345309 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 28.8173652695 163% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 55.5748502994 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 2260.96107784 108% => OK
No of words: 475.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14947368421 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9813261843 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 204.123752495 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551578947368 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 761.4 705.55239521 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 3.0 0.471057884232 637% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 19.7664670659 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8085043472 57.8364921388 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9032258065 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3225806452 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90322580645 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.20758483034 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119729024843 0.218282227539 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031734384297 0.0743258471296 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401299902825 0.0701772020484 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0544397628048 0.128457276422 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307607514244 0.0628817314937 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.3799401198 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 98.500998004 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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