The described case about the incidents is a worrying one, due to the fact that it concerns human lives. Before a proposal about possible solutions is made, the case should be investigated properly.
The first thing that is needed to shed light on is the causes of incidents. Even though mopeds are popular means of transportation in Balmer Islands, they are not necessarily the cause. The incidents can occur due to the great amount of cars, as well. By giving a proper answer to this question, it can be found out that a ban or somewhat soft regulation is needed concerning other means of transportation.
Secondly, the system of regulations, concerning the traffic, should be taken into account. It can lie behind the reasons of incidents. So, the second question to be addressed refers to the regulations. According to statistics, published by different sources, the poorly organized traffic is one of the major causes of such situations. Therefore, a positive answer to this question means that there is such need, and after applying corresponding regulations, the number of incidents will probably go down.
The third main part to be looked into is about the increase of the number of incidents in summer season. The increased number of such cases is being correlated with the increase of population during the summer season according to the letter. It can be duly noted that this increase comes from the growing number of tourists, but are all tourists involved in such accidents? This is a question to be answered, because it will provide precious information. The results being positive, means that the tourists are not familiar with the traffic regulations in Balmer Island. Thus, some guidelines for tourists are needed to be provided.
The similarity with the case of Seavile should be taken into consideration. If these two cases are not the same, they can’t be compared. Otherwise, some helpful advices should be gained from the experience from the other town.
To conclude I would like to say that all the questions, mentioned in my writing, are essential to be investigated to find out possible sensible and sound solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... with the increase of population during the summer season according to the letter. It can be duly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 355.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05915492958 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8664016953 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518309859155 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8729472368 57.8364921388 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5238095238 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.70786347227 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107342491207 0.218282227539 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330268734082 0.0743258471296 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546684028661 0.0701772020484 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442669748239 0.128457276422 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617518906092 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 98.500998004 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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