The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham College.
"To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate. Moreover, the average rent for an apartment in our town has risen in recent years. Consequently, students will find it increasingly difficult to afford off-campus housing. Finally, attractive new dormitories would make prospective students more likely to enroll at Buckingham."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Building new dormitory seems to be a attractive option but the argument has many holes and loops which we need to introspect it. Building the new dormitory would require some college fund and it is quite reasonable to debate on this argument.
Moreover, the argument states that Buckingham's enrolment will double in next 50 years. We can't be sure about this. Our country population has become stagnant for quite sometime. The population aren't increasing for last few years. We aren't sure population would increase further or not. And even though population rises we can't be sure the number of enrolment would increase or not. Student enrolment depend on our college eduaction system, college infrastructure and the reasearch opportunity for our students.
Real estate rates has risen and so though rent for accomodation. But we can't be sure wheather the rate would increase further or become stagnant for years to come. Our country economy is slowing contracting. Our country aren't showing the economic growth which we had earlier. So slowing economy would definately not increase the real estate price.
There can be possibilty that new attractive housing offer may come in future which didn't increase the price for off-campus housing. Definatey new dormitories wont make our student enrol in our college. Student enrolment will depend on lot of factor. College fees can be one factor and then the quality of education.
Having new dormitory would help our student because there will be adequate bathroom for them to go. Increased dormitory would be helpful in morning time as most of students visit at the same time for their bath. But there is no evidence that using our collge fund for dormitory woud be a viable option. It may be better to wait and watch now for sometime. We may get our answer in next few years to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...arent increasing for last few years. We arent sure population would increase further ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ot. And even though population rises we cant be sure the number of enrolment would i...
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...so though rent for accomodation. But we cant be sure wheather the rate would increas...
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... housing offer may come in future which didnt increase the price for off-campus housi...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...ory would be helpful in morning time as most of students visit at the same time for their bath. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 55.5748502994 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 306.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00980392157 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56321878962 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.8473053892 57% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4533048139 57.8364921388 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.652173913 119.503703932 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3043478261 23.324526521 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.21739130435 5.70786347227 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138428257961 0.218282227539 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448788268526 0.0743258471296 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478180752804 0.0701772020484 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845384238503 0.128457276422 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441475992548 0.0628817314937 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.1389221557 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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