The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants. Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States. This change, however, has had little im

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The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants.

Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States. This change, however, has had little impact on our customers. In fact, only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that an average of 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers do not distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine.

Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.

According to the memorandum, the author argues that customers do not distinguish butter from margarin or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine. At first glance, the argument seems persuasive; however, lack of alternative explanations leads me to conclude that this argument is unsound on many grounds.

First of all, the author needs to consider the alternative explanations that can account for the less number of complaints from the customers. Since the author does not mention when Happy Pancake House restaurants changed their policy, it is hard to conclude that customers do not care about margarine due to the fact that only 2 percent of people complained on it. It is possible that only few people complained because they changed their policy yesterday. Even if they replaced butter by margarine long time ago and can conclude that there were only few complaints, it is far-fetched to say that last 98 percent of people are happy with the change. The 98 percent of customers may not have affection on this restaurants so they do not feel necessity to complain about it for the restaurants' development. Thus, without explanations on the duration of the policy and people's response, the author cannot corroborate that most people are happy with the change.

Secondly, other alternatives for the the author needs to take into consideration the alternative explanations that can account for the number of customers who were fine with margarine. The author mentions that "many" servers have reported that "a number of" customers do not complain when they ask for butter and are given margarine instead. However, we cannot figure out whether the number of many servers or the number of customers is proportionally numerous. What I mean is that there is a possibility that 100 servers out of one million servers reported about the complaints. As we can see from this compelling example, the author needs to provide more specific report and explanations on this.

Last but not least, the author needs to consider other possible explanations when dealing with the soundness conclusion. The author adamantly conclude that those customers do not distinguish butter from margarine or they use 'butter' for both butter and margarine. However, even if all aforementioned alternative explanations can be provided by the author, these reports and less number of complaints cannot indicate that people do not distinguish those. As I mentioned before, not complaining does not means being satisfied with it. People could feel difference between butter and margarine, even could think that the taste is worsened, they do not necessarily need to express their inconvenience. Thus, the author cannot hastily conclude that ‘butter’ can refer both butter and margarine.

In brief, the author’s argument is unsound in many respects. In order to bolster the argument, the author should provide alternatives explanations on the number of customers who do no care about butter or margarine and conclusion.

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argument 1 -- OK

argument 2 -- not OK

argument 3 -- not OK
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Let's analyze the structure of the statement and argue accordingly:

condition 1:
In fact, only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that an average of 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. //your argument 1 is OK

condition 2:
Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers do not distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine.

//maybe margarine and butter have similar flavor and color, so it is likely that customer will not acknowledge that Pancake has chosen margarine to replace butter which triggers no complaints among customers. or : customers indeed can discriminate the difference between butter and margarine since they have disparate tastes. But the reason why those customers don't complain is because they like the flavor of margarine.

conclusion:
Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States. This change, however, has had little impact on our customers.

//Since it is 'Recently', there is little impact on our customers. As time goes by, more customers may complain and there is a big impact.

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