Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
At first glance, the argument makes sense that since there is possibility of death, inoculations shouldn't be routinely admisitered. However the author relies on many unstated assumptions which make little sense logically.
The biggest flaw is author's reasoning is that author assumes,without providing proof that there is direct causal relationship between a person receiving the cow flu vaccine shot and his/her death. There is a strong possiblity that the patient's death was a result of a different psyological factor. It might be also possible that out of a million inoculation only his/her body reacted strongly to the vaccine due to presence of mutated gene in his/her body. Remanding the vaccine and rejecting the vaccine completly, especially when it can save countless lives make little sense.
The argument states that person can die as a result of the inoculation, but provides no information about how this side-effect was disocvered. All vaccines go through a extensive testing both on animals and humans before getting approval from FDA for selling in the market. If this side-effect was discovered after the vaccine was out, it might be very well be because it was a bad batch. If this is so, then while loss of life while tragic it is, deeming the vaccine unsafe for the others will cause nothing but more suffering.
Given that we don't know answers to these questions, the argument goes beyond the data in asserting that inoculations against cow flu shouldn't be routinely administered. There needs to be special study to revalute the inoculation shot medicine and based on its results one should decide whether or not the inocultations should be perfomed routinely or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...e is possibility of death, inoculations shouldnt be routinely admisitered. However the a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ions shouldnt be routinely admisitered. However the author relies on many unstated assu...
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Suggestion: , without
...authors reasoning is that author assumes,without providing proof that there is direct ca...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
.... There is a strong possiblity that the patients death was a result of a different psyol...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[14]
Message: Did you mean 'side effect' (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.
Suggestion: side effect
... provides no information about how this side-effect was disocvered. All vaccines go through...
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...was disocvered. All vaccines go through a extensive testing both on animals and h...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[14]
Message: Did you mean 'side effect' (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.
Suggestion: side effect
... FDA for selling in the market. If this side-effect was discovered after the vaccine was ou...
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...g but more suffering. Given that we dont know answers to these questions, the ar...
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Suggestion: shouldn't
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Suggestion:
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...based on its results one should decide whether or not the inocultations should be perfomed ro...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249158249158 0.25644967241 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.178451178451 0.15541462614 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0673400673401 0.0836205057962 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0572390572391 0.0520304965353 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030303030303 0.0272364105082 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138047138047 0.125424944231 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0572390572391 0.0416121511921 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83823714348 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016835016835 0.026700313972 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111111111111 0.113004496875 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023569023569 0.0255425247493 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010101010101 0.0127820249294 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1696.0 2731.13054187 62% => OK
No of words: 275.0 446.07635468 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16727272727 6.12365571057 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.57801047555 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.378187486979 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.305454545455 0.287650121315 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189090909091 0.208842608468 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130909090909 0.135150697306 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83823714348 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 207.018472906 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.469332199767 133% => OK
Word variations: 69.9979551629 52.1807786196 134% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.039408867 60% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9166666667 23.2022227129 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4575331024 57.7814097925 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 141.986410481 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 23.2022227129 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.724660767414 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.58251231527 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.4621212121 51.9672348444 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.67088607595 1.8405768891 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418346704997 0.441005458295 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0768629917902 0.135418324435 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0560176215628 0.0829849096947 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569902227564 0.58762219726 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106790428573 0.147661913831 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162288742617 0.193483328276 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753424790313 0.0970749176394 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.257991180584 0.42659136922 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0595543374803 0.0774707102158 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258098124619 0.312017818177 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216334361861 0.0698173142475 31% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.