Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
The argument mainly concludes that the nature's way store is going to benefitted from the people of plainsville as they are more health conscious. It is concluded that it is going to be benefitted mainly from the children who are required to participate in the fitness for life program. There are many questions which needs to answered in the argument.
Firstly, it is stated that the store will prove to be successful as it has gain much from other areas where the people were very health conscious. However, no authentic data has been provided that how much persons were satisfied from the products in other areas and how much profit the store has gained.
Secondly, it also stated that as the store has been successful in other areas where the people were health conscious so it would also be successful in plainsville. How any store can assume that as it has been successful in any area it will also be succesfull in the other area also? Not yet any views have been taken from the local people of plainsville that whether they will welcome any other health product store in their area. Also it is been said by the merchants that the mostly buy running shoes and exercise clothing but there is nothing mention about whether the people will buy any health food products which is the main product of nature's way store. Also in the argument it is stated that the people buy the products from the local merchants but the people may not prefer to buy from the nature's way store as they have no idea about the authenticity of the products sold by the store. The may also tend to support the local merchants by not buying the product from the store.
Thirdly it is stated that the school children tends to participate in the fitness life program. Here the data is only given about that the children are participating in the fitness programs but no data is given about that the children tends to buy the health related products from the local store. So no conclusion can be drawn about the children that, whether in future they will buy the products from the nature's way store or not.
In conclusion before opening new nature's way store in plainsville the store owner should advertise about their product in the plainsville and also take the opinion of the local residents that whether they will buy the products from it's store or not. And after taking sufficient data to solve the above confusions then it should decide whether it will be profitable to start a new store in the plainsville.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... that the natures way store is going to benefitted from the people of plainsville as they ...
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Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...thentic data has been provided that how much persons were satisfied from the product...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...her health product store in their area. Also it is been said by the merchants that t...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...n said by the merchants that the mostly buy running shoes and exercise clothing but...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 13.6137724551 140% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 441.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6462585034 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36998011696 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.340136054422 0.468620217663 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5950528708 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0625 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5625 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.70786347227 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269302803311 0.218282227539 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113218216877 0.0743258471296 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574864482613 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169193995707 0.128457276422 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350424012989 0.0628817314937 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.3550499002 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.5979740519 79% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.32208582834 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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