"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather an

Essay topics:

"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."

The business manager of a television station concludes that, due to less weather and local new programs, this affected advertising contracts with them. Hence, this argument is true at first glance but the argument is full of gaps and loop holes. There is no evidence that support advertising contracts canceled directly connected with late-night news programs.

Firstly, the late-night news program is changed, they broadcast more national news and less weather and local news. In addition, viewers complained of station's coverage of weather and local news. Here, the business manager did not provided how many complaints they received. Moreover, complaints are concerned with coverage of weather and local news. Here, complainer also complaints for wrong weather reports. There may be complaints after changed schedule is same as before, the author not provided any information.

Secondly, local businesses that used to advertise during late-night news program have canceled their contract. This may be true that advertising contract canceled due to TRP rating is decreased. Moreover, there may be advertisers could not get benefit from advertising. Also, the advertiser reaches their budget for advertising therefore, they canceled the contract.

In conclusion, the author did not provide any example that supports the argument. Hence, the author of this argument failed to convince. For support this argument, the author needs to consider all above points and support his/her argument by giving concrete evidence.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...ews. Here, the business manager did not provided how many complaints they received. More...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 55.5748502994 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 441.139720559 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66375545852 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71371293719 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 204.123752495 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558951965066 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 705.55239521 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1815284484 57.8364921388 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 119.503703932 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3125 23.324526521 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.70786347227 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276768337716 0.218282227539 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109864328062 0.0743258471296 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128625285957 0.0701772020484 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160719157045 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132843929795 0.0628817314937 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.3550499002 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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