In the argument given, there are many assumption that author is taking to reach the conclusion.
First of all, there is no data given in the passage about the number of complaints received in response to weather and local news. Since there is not enough information given it would be superficial to take any decision based on this. There should be enough number of data in respect to different age group of viewers so that variance of the problem could be examined carefully. It also might be possible that people who are concerned with late-night shows, are more active into complaining than rest of the viewers so unless a survey is not being done it should be right to reach to a conclusion.
The author also assumes that weather and local news is not at all important at the time when they became penchantic to national news. Since there is also possibility that during that duration weather and local news were more important but it is not as much important in other months of year. There might had be dispute in some part of city or Maybe it is raining heavily as much as there is condition of flood .then more importance should be given to these news rather than national news during that time period. Author should also write information about the importance of weather and local news at that particular time period in the argument given. As only then we would be able to know about whether these things were co-related or not.
Author is also trying to draw conclusion based on the fact that some local businesses has stopped advertising during late - night program, but it should also not be forgot that revenu also could be generated with other national advertisers. Television station should contact them regarding businees as well.
Since this is late night show it could be expected that more young people would be involved in this news program than old people. It might be possible that number of complaints received is from old age group than young people.Nothing is mentioned regarding this case. They might also target advertising based on this data whose products are more for young people.
Since in the giver argument author has presumed many a things which should not be overlooked at the time of drawing any conclusion. Author had also not provided many information in the passage which should be stated above. So it would be rather tough to draw a right conclusion according to this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'many assumptions'.
Suggestion: many assumptions
In the argument given, there are many assumption that author is taking to reach the conc...
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Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
In the argument given, there are many assumption that author is taking to reach the conc...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in response to weather and local news. Since there is not enough information given i...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...espect to different age group of viewers so that variance of the problem could be...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...n other months of year. There might had be dispute in some part of city or Maybe i...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y as much as there is condition of flood .then more importance should be given to ...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...then more importance should be given to these news rather than national news during that ...
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Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to these news rather than national news during that time period. Author should a...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od. Author should also write information about the importance of weather and loca...
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Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as only 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...e period in the argument given. As only then we would be able to know about whether ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...act them regarding businees as well. Since this is late night show it could be exp...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nothing
...is from old age group than young people.Nothing is mentioned regarding this case. They ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...products are more for young people. Since in the giver argument author has presum...
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Line 11, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a thing' or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: a thing; things
...giver argument author has presumed many a things which should not be overlooked at the t...
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Line 11, column 162, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...onclusion. Author had also not provided many information in the passage which should...
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Line 11, column 162, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...onclusion. Author had also not provided many information in the passage which should be stated a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215909090909 0.25644967241 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.193181818182 0.15541462614 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0954545454545 0.0836205057962 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0727272727273 0.0520304965353 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0295454545455 0.0272364105082 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143181818182 0.125424944231 114% => OK
Participles: 0.075 0.0416121511921 180% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.4653699131 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272727272727 0.026700313972 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0818181818182 0.113004496875 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0431818181818 0.0255425247493 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113636363636 0.0127820249294 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2435.0 2731.13054187 89% => OK
No of words: 418.0 446.07635468 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82535885167 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306220095694 0.378187486979 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200956937799 0.287650121315 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145933014354 0.208842608468 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0933014354067 0.135150697306 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4653699131 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 207.018472906 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423444976077 0.469332199767 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.34076969 52.1807786196 87% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2222222222 23.2022227129 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9863663766 57.7814097925 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.277777778 141.986410481 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 23.2022227129 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.724660767414 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 3.58251231527 447% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.3179160021 51.9672348444 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.46923076923 1.8405768891 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297255681966 0.441005458295 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156878514013 0.135418324435 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120730756963 0.0829849096947 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605269998244 0.58762219726 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171728671085 0.147661913831 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124756555449 0.193483328276 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930474342569 0.0970749176394 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275088865811 0.42659136922 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107627114197 0.0774707102158 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168683184756 0.312017818177 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853412388608 0.0698173142475 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.82512315271 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 5.36822660099 130% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.82389162562 212% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 14.657635468 116% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.