Techno Corporation is our top pick for the investment this term. We urge all our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed a satellite technology has been approved by the FTA to compete with current satellite provider. The company is Techno Corporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of the respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not monopoly.Thus, the new venture of Techno Corporation into satellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.
Newsletter urges people to invest in a techno corporation, a company which has developed a satellite and also been approved by FTA to provide the satellite service to consumers and be in the competitive market. There are different criteria to assess whether the investment would be worth or not. I shall explain these points and give analysis.
The most important point is about the knowledge of leadership team of Techno Corporation. Are these people seasoned businessman or just naive? Another point to examine is unit share price of Techno Corporation. Consumer would like to compare the base price with the existing satellite company price in market. Since, Techno Corporation is new venture so price should be at lower side than established company. Another major point to consider is to know the authenticity of survey which claims that 80% of the respondents are dis-satisfied with the existing satellite provider. Sampling of data used in survey is to be double checked.
If it turns out that leadership team is experience then only consumer would evaluate the other parameters. Share price factor is going to key parameters in taking decision about investment. If base price is kept low then there are higher chances to make money in short term as it is evident that it will take some time to achieve break-even and generate substantial revenue. Finally, if source of sampling and sampling data comes out as genuine, there are bright chances that investment may be worthwhile. However, basis risks parameters such as pre-closure, poor economy etc. must be considered before taking investment decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, so, then, while, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 2260.96107784 60% => OK
No of words: 261.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2030651341 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82023049302 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7149331316 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.875 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.70786347227 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147440508631 0.218282227539 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042321396707 0.0743258471296 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055382761988 0.0701772020484 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109956913173 0.128457276422 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581104022981 0.0628817314937 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.3799401198 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.