Two years ago, radio station WCQP in Rockville decided to increase the number of call-in advice programs that it broadcast; since that time, its share of the radio audience in the Rockville listening area has increased significantly. Given WCQP's recent success with call-in advice programming, and citing a nationwide survey indicating that many radio listeners are quite interested in such programs, the station manager of KICK in Medway recommends that KICK include more call-in advice programs in an attempt to gain a larger audience share in its listening area.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The head of KICK wants to use more and more call-in advice program for gaining a larger share of the audience. However, this conclusion was flawed. Since the share of these programs is known, what is the meaning the success in the radio program, and last but not least the two years is not long enough to change one program?
Firstly, there is not the clear way about how they obtain their statistics about the share of the audience, perhaps the number of people who like this change is least and just this people participant in the statistics. For example, In 2008 there was an election about the people who like to go to university without any hesitation, the old dislike the attitudes and wants the young understand the life meaning. On the other hand, the young want to continue their study.Since the number of elderly was far greater than the student. They win the election. By the way, this election has lots of faults why should the parents take decision for their children. In this sample just like the above, there was lots of fault regarding the election, first of all, the age group. The call-in advice good for what kind of age group. And, more importantly, the age group of the listener. if these two number is relatively equal. then they should be more realistic about the time of the program, the subject of this program.Although some parents might like this kind of program, It is suitable in the noon when people eating or in the night when the family gets together.
secondly, what is the meaning of success, success for some people mean money for other means prosperity in life? If they could raise their children fine, they call themselves successful. probably some parents and wants this call- in advice for their children, what about the others who like the routine broadcast and never will call.children who dislike this kind of program never let their parents see these shows. and mostly parents overcome to their children due to loving them so much.
Thirdly, the Two years is not sufficient time for making the big desition. at least there should be five to six years for making such decision.
In conclusion, If somebody wants to change the program in radio, he or she should think about all aspect of this issue, such as the reliable statistics and defining some vocabulary such success relating to radio program, and there should be at least five to six years of experiment before changing on program,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Since
... the young want to continue their study.Since the number of elderly was far greater t...
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... the young want to continue their study.Since the number of elderly was far greater t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fault seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of faults'.
Suggestion: lots of faults
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Suggestion: Although
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Suggestion: Secondly
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Suggestion: Probably
... fine, they call themselves successful. probably some parents and wants this call- in ad...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'call'.
Suggestion: will never call
...hers who like the routine broadcast and never will call.children who dislike this kind of progr...
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Suggestion: And
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Suggestion: At
...ient time for making the big desition. at least there should be five to six years...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, by the way, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 55.5748502994 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 424.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76179245283 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3814904475 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.471057884232 637% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0841052968 57.8364921388 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.95 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.70786347227 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129693159735 0.218282227539 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436383716736 0.0743258471296 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489601305459 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935340855609 0.128457276422 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048418675716 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.3550499002 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 98.500998004 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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