Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument that woven baskets which were believed to be palean were not quite palean based on the evidences given in the argument is not entirely
convincing since it ignores certain factors which might be crucial in determining the origin of a certain woven basket. The argument also states that a basket with similar features was found across the brim river which is believed to be inaccessible due to the deep and broad nature of the river and henceforth the baskets are
not originated from the paean village. However , in order to estimate the arguments conclusion , the given evidence should be carefully analysed.
First and foremost , the brim river which is considered to be deep and broad in nature could have been slightly different or perhaps as shallow
as it is considered deep as the information is given to the audience in present whereas the prehistoric times of the village are not taken into consideration.
Additionally , the weather changes and the climatic conditions would have been much different making the river accessible to the people of the village. The river could have been flowing in a different direction which wouldn’t have caused an obstacle for the villagers to travel.
Secondly , even if the river’s characteristics were similar as it today , the argument states that as no palean boats were found nearby the
villagers must have not crossed the river. This evidence is pretty lopsided as it does not take into consideration the different means of transport the villagers might be using as there is no extensive information given as to how the villagers were travelling in the ancient times. Furthermore, the boats might have been made in lithos and hence
no paean boats were to be found or might have been perished overtime and hence nowhere to be found.
In addition , there are several factors which could be taken into consideration . For instance , the basket could have been swayed by the river’s flow to the other side of
the river and hence found in the lithos region . Another possibility could have been that an individual could have travelled to paean from lithos or vice-versa and the hence the
basket was spotted elsewhere . Another major loophole in the argument could be that the ‘palean baskets’ wouldn’t have been palean at all as it is stated that it was found in the vicinity of Palea .
Consequently , the argument’s claims that as the river couldn’t be accessed and as the basket was found in lithos , the palean baskets were not quite palean is baseless
as the evidence could have been more warranted such as there was no way of interconnecting the two villages except for the river which was the same as it is today with due study and research. Henceforth , the argument is rife with loopholes and gaps which make it unwarranted .
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...holes and gaps which make it unwarranted .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, except for, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 47.0 19.6327345309 239% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 2260.96107784 105% => OK
No of words: 470.0 441.139720559 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04893617021 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83567837064 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404255319149 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 705.55239521 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.2209171947 57.8364921388 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.2 119.503703932 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 23.324526521 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.70786347227 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 5.15768463074 271% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257228569065 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10547808283 0.0743258471296 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658513609192 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112986205254 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510513921479 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.3799401198 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.3550499002 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.197005988 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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