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Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa

Essay topics: Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
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according to author the Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean this conclusion has lots of fault because of the lake of proper evidence. they should search all relative places and books for find the source of this baskets, they must search for the river condition perhaps in prehistoric time it was desert instead of the river.

Firstly, perhaps this basket from other places that sometimes it is mention in the cave painting or in their books.they should search other places that maybe send that basket to this place so there is not enough evidence to show whether or not the origin of this basket. moreover, perhaps the Palen and Lithos are the same people who live in a different place in different seasons or even they are they far relatives who interest in this art and come to learn to their village. for example in "Shahr Sukhte" in Iran, the profession at first it is the first burn city in the world but after finding the other one in Iraq they said this is the second burnt city they find.

Secondly, in today's life, the Brim River is deep what about the past perhaps in the past it was a desert or jungle. before the conclusion, this should be more sensible to ask a profession about the ecology of that river. Not just this but also if there was an enough evidence about the condition of rever, they could past through the river by wary means such as boats and after using it they burn it. since they mostly build from woods.
In the conclusion, because of a lake of evidence about the ways of living of this people and also the weather and earth condition at that time. it is understandable the author way of thinking is not acceptable.so the conclusion on the origin of Palean is not acceptable according to the mention reasons.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
according to author the Palean baskets were not u...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fault seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of faults'.
Suggestion: lots of faults
...not uniquely Palean this conclusion has lots of fault because of the lake of proper evidence....
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...because of the lake of proper evidence. they should search all relative places and b...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...places and books for find the source of this baskets, they must search for the river...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...so there is not enough evidence to show whether or not the origin of this basket. moreover, pe...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Moreover
...ether or not the origin of this basket. moreover, perhaps the Palen and Lithos are the s...
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Suggestion: For
...art and come to learn to their village. for example in 'Shahr Sukhte' in ...
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Suggestion: Before
... in the past it was a desert or jungle. before the conclusion, this should be more sen...
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Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...of evidence about the ways of living of this people and also the weather and earth c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ather and earth condition at that time. it is understandable the author way of thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 2260.96107784 64% => OK
No of words: 315.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59682539683 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36352137882 2.78398813304 85% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48253968254 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 705.55239521 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3982218617 57.8364921388 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 119.503703932 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.70786347227 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0338514234962 0.218282227539 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0157546651236 0.0743258471296 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279254605625 0.0701772020484 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0252836858032 0.128457276422 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237574560364 0.0628817314937 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.3550499002 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.197005988 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.5979740519 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 98.500998004 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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