All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
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Martin Luther King Jr. once said, "Our home is where our heart is most familiar." This statement could stand true when applied to a work environment: familiarity brings efficiency. In our modern society, outside consultants are often seeked out by companies to increase efficieny in the workplace, while the voices of current employees go unheard. The implementation of a feedback system within a company could lessen tensions and increase efficiency in the workplace without the aid of an outside consultant could.
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Sentence: In our modern society, outside consultants are often seeked out by companies to increase efficieny in the workplace, while the voices of current employees go unheard.
Error: efficieny Suggestion: efficiency
Sentence: In order to work well with a company, an outisde consultant must be knowledgeable on the work being done at said company.
Error: outisde Suggestion: outside
Sentence: This may take a CEO's time away from much more imporant matters.
Error: imporant Suggestion: important
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