In any profession business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to

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In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Those in powers refer to people who have authority in particular field. Power has something do with influencing others. Power can be of two types downgrade power enforcing the subordinates and upgrade power where the subordinates obey the order. In any field politics, business or education people who are in power have to be changed after few years.

In politics, the authority is given to a leader for few years mainly to bring new ideas and changes in social policies which benefit the society. Most of the democratic countries have a rule to elect their President or Prime Minister every five years which is beneficial for their country .Every eligible leader gets a fair chance to compete for the power and to bring changes in society. If a particular leader is given the power for longtime they may become biased to few policies and also corrupt. More intimidating fact would be that they may lust for power so much that they become corrupt and carry out monocratic rule which is dangerous for the welfare of the society. In our history we have read how autocratic rule treated people with discrimination and most of their policies were beneficial for the upper class people and degraded the middle and lower classes.

Education is important for every child today. It is the field which is important to have better society tomorrow .It is also necessary that our children have updated knowledge in science, technology, art, etc. For the proper child development it is essential have curricular activities. People who heads educational institution like Counselor, Principal, etc., also needs to step down after few years because the new always get new ideas to experiment and are better updated, also they can learn from the mistakes made by the predecessors. Education especially to girl in developing country lags behind. In order attract to girl children to school the educational head decided to launch a program that every girl child would be awarded a bicycle if they attended school regularly. As result more parent s sent their girl children to school.

Our country’s economy lies in business. It is important to have stable business and the person who heads business at particular area has to step down after few years. New CEO’s have to be appointed to get new ideas and who is always creative to establish their business. As the new generation is approaching the particular head has to know the mind-set of the present and develop marketing strategy. They should have acumen about the investment they make to get a better profit.

In the profession of business it is sometimes necessary to have people in power for long terms. There are many family owned business companies where the successor has always been successful. Since it is their business and the reputation the family also matter they are more careful than appointing a new member. For example business magnate in India like Mukesh Ambani who is successor of his father’s reliance company has been head of the company for long time and has established well. Also, Steve Jobs who brought computer to palms of every person severed as CEO of Apple Inc., for long time until he was diagnosed with Cancer.

The American politics, when President Obama took office the country’s economy was in recession and he made few policies to recuperate the ailing economy and it is recovering slowly and within his first term he could not make much difference which he promised. So he is given another term to make the changes he promised. Sometime the time constraint lacks people to do great things.

To sum up, many professions like politics, education and business requires people to head them and those who head them are required to be changed every few years. Power makes people greed and it is dangerous to have people in power for longtime.

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Sentence: In order attract to girl children to school the educational head decided to launch a program that every girl child would be awarded a bicycle if they attended school regularly.
Description: The fragment order attract to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace attract with verb, past participle

Sentence: It is important to have stable business and the person who heads business at particular area has to step down after few years.
Description: The word heads is not usually used as a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to heads

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No. of Words: 644 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5

better to have 5 paragraphs:

para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion

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No. of Words: 644 350
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.038 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.831 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.515 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 210 100
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.642 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.277 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.527 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5