The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppor

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The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The increasingly rapid pace of life gave us various good things which made our life more convenient. But it also gave us various bad thing like mental stress,freedom of thinking,lack of self dependent etc.So, i will support the author's statement about the adverse effect of increasingly rapid pace of life .

Nowadays people are getting used to live a routine life in which they have no time for any thing other than their usual daily life.We know that humans are not a machine and they require some kind social interaction .For example we can consider two people one is living in village and other living in city.We know that city life is very fast life and they do not have any time for anything other than their work,due to that they will suffer from various mental diseases. However the other person who is living in village will have normal and healthy life due to their slow pace life .

In the era of rapid pace of life everyone is only concerned about their physical comfort and to get those amenities they are ready to go to any extreme and it gave our society a very big problem in form of corruption, moral depletion etc.But we can not forget the fact that these amenities can not give us long term satisfaction these things can only give us temporary satisfaction.

The advent of mass media and other scientific miracles has certainly shortened the time to convey our message but it also shorten the time one spend with his family and friends.For example nowadays due to mobile phone people can talk to anybody form anywhere in the world but we can not deny a fact that feeling can not be exchange through telephonic conversation. Feeling and keenness towards any relationship can be only exchange by physical presence not by virtual presence.

To sum up, i would say that The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. At the end of the day ,all that matter is whether we have achieved what we wanted to or not. We should live our life in an uninfluenced way which will give us mental and physical comfort.

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