ISSUE ESSAY:
The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Real talent of any person is based on his or her performance and also a factor of fate also affects the popularity of the musician. But the fact is that real talent will be recognised one day or the other for some it may take more time and for others it may take less time. One should work relentlessly on the practice of the music itself not on getting fame.
For instance, if we take the case of Justin Beiber, who became popular within no time at a very young age. The thing is he concentrated on improving his talent and not on getting famed.This is well supported by the saying " things fall in place". If we put our efforts in a focused manner success comes to our way, we need not go behind it.
Taking other example for such a type if take the case of a very famous singer in India "Shreya Ghoshal" she also became popular very soon with her soothing voice won the hearts of many people.
Unlikely to that for some it takes a very long time to achieve, there may be many factors due to which he or she may not be famous for but when the right time comes they will definitely come into lime light. The main point is that one should get a platform, so that they will be able to prove themselves.
So we can say that the real talent of any musician comes out with time for some it may be very simple to get and for others it may take years to get recognised but the truth is real talent will be recognised even if he or she is dead also. So one should concentrate on their work and improving themselves in that particular area and not bothering for popularity.
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Sentence: Unlikely to that for some it takes a very long time to achieve, there may be many factors due to which he or she may not be famous for but when the right time comes they will definitely come into lime light.
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Sentence: But the fact is that real talent will be recognised one day or the other for some it may take more time and for others it may take less time.
Error: recognised Suggestion: recognized
Sentence: So we can say that the real talent of any musician comes out with time for some it may be very simple to get and for others it may take years to get recognised but the truth is real talent will be recognised even if he or she is dead also.
Error: recognised Suggestion: recognized
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