It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Every nation there are several of social group presents. which are helpful for people or some times misfortune for peoples. which social group we have join it up to our decision. while taking the decision there are many factor we consider like locality, caste, religions or thought of particular leader. so i completely agree It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
What is social group ? it group which make by people with in there locality. it primarily base on caste or particular religions. that means some people join group by caste it upper class or lower class. upeer class people provide high services. and gropu made by religions it hindu or muslims. if join the group by hindu caste it clearly identify our caste it hindu. ex vikarm who life in hindu locality but his caste is muslim he joins the muslims group so it clearly get that he is muslim caste person.
Some time social group made for help for people, they didnt see the caste or religeions. there aim is clear which is help for people. such group help in many situation like natural disaster or calamity, bom blast and hapless condition. if any one who interest to help to people such person join such type of group. ex one my mate his nature is always help to others he is in that group. so people who is in that particular social group clearly state his nature or they no need to define our self.
The group leader his thought and way he his behave like some peoples some they can define ourselves such type of group. ex some time group leader young or group is form for young peoples. all student joins such group. they can organization games or farwell for student or help for senior citizion peoples.
But some time many people has force to join such group. it not his personal identification. ex parents like one particular group but due to parents force boy also join. or in collage admission if want admission then you have join such group. in some states if people want benefits of particular scheme then they have to join such type of group.
So every group have there own identity that identity makes by peoples. take above points considers some time we join the group by other parents but more than that at we conclude that group which we joins shows our unique identity. i agree It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. that defenetly shows our identity.
Sentence: Every nation there are several of social group presents. which are helpful for people or some times misfortune for peoples. which social group we have join it up to our decision. while taking the decision there are many factor we consider like locality, caste, religions or thought of particular leader. so i completely agree It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and join
Sentence: What is social group ? it group which make by people with in there locality. it primarily base on caste or particular religions. that means some people join group by caste it upper class or lower class. upeer class people provide high services. and gropu made by religions it hindu or muslims. if join the group by hindu caste it clearly identify our caste it hindu. ex vikarm who life in hindu locality but his caste is muslim he joins the muslims group so it clearly get that he is muslim caste
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Suggestion: Refer to with and in
Description: The fragment it primarily base is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace primarily with adjective
Sentence: What is social group ? it group which make by people with in there locality. it primarily base on caste or particular religions. that means some people join group by caste it upper class or lower class. upeer class people provide high services. and gropu made by religions it hindu or muslims. if join the group by hindu caste it clearly identify our caste it hindu. ex vikarm who life in hindu locality but his caste is muslim he joins the muslims group so it clearly get that he is muslim caste
Error: muslim Suggestion: muslin
Error: upeer Suggestion: upper
Error: gropu Suggestion: group
Sentence: Some time social group made for help for people, they didnt see the caste or religeions. there aim is clear which is help for people. such group help in many situation like natural disaster or calamity, bom blast and hapless condition. if any one who interest to help to people such person join such type of group. ex one my mate his nature is always help to others he is in that group. so people who is in that particular social group clearly state his nature or they no need to define our self.
Error: bom Suggestion: boy
Error: religeions Suggestion: religions
Sentence: The group leader his thought and way he his behave like some peoples some they can define ourselves such type of group. ex some time group leader young or group is form for young peoples. all student joins such group. they can organization games or farwell for student or help for senior citizion peoples.
Error: citizion Suggestion: citizen
Error: farwell Suggestion: farewell
Sentence: So every group have there own identity that identity makes by peoples. take above points considers some time we join the group by other parents but more than that at we conclude that group which we joins shows our unique identity. i agree It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. that defenetly shows our identity.
Error: defenetly Suggestion: definitely
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