You are here"Over the past ten years, there has been a 20 percent decline in the size of the average audience at Classical Shakespeare Theatre productions. In spite of increased advertising, we are attracting fewer and fewer people to our shows, causing our profits t

"Over the past ten years, there has been a 20 percent decline in the size of the average audience at Classical Shakespeare Theatre productions. In spite of increased advertising, we are attracting fewer and fewer people to our shows, causing our profits t


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Marketing is an important part of our business endeavors , while it is an arduous intention to be competent even in few field, we frequently rely on competence of different individuals, however, this passage is informatively impotent. The writer of the note draws a conclusion based on invalid cause and effect relationship, moreover, he uses data to make a sweeping generalization from a limited sample. Furthermore, the author fails to evaluate supply and demand disparity. Rather than bring strong expertise, the author's conclusion that the new program 'Shakespeare in the Park' will attract more audiences bases on a flawed assumption.

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Sentence: Additionally, there is a fallacious hypothesis which relates to supply and demand contemplation, particularly, the author suggest that, although, it is possible to organize supply for a potential audience by initiating of the new program.
Description: The fragment author suggest that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace suggest with verb, past tense

Sentence: However, this data suffers from a lack of representative sampling which is a cornerstone for making analytic judgment, conversely, if the author adds information that will provide the forenamed mathematical evidence then, in the best case, it could lead to adequate evaluate the recommendation.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to adequate and evaluate

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