As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.”
From the history of humans we can see that, man is a dependent creature, initially he was depending on animals for many purposes like food, shelter, security and so on. As the evolution took place there has been a drastic and dramatic change in life style of mankind. Technology made his life more comfortable and also lazy. Many of us accepted the fact that-‘we are becoming servants in thoughts, as in action, of the machine we have created to serve us’. When technology solves many of our problems it surely backslide the thinking ability of humans as they depend more on machines. In contrast...
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.494 4.7
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