As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

There have been many times that I had felt it has been a long time since I was trying to solve a problem; and then I had concluded that I am being lazy and my mind prefer not to work on problems hardly and I have been feeding it with rapid answers through using computer and internet. But now that I consider the topic of issue I see that it is not what I think. Technology is not only the computer and the internet, and thinking is not just problem solving in the area I was trying to deal with. Therefore, first we must specify exactly what the various representations of technologies are and concl...

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Sentence: It can be seen as transportation technologies like ships, cars, airplains, etc which helps us to reduce the time consumption for moving from some place to another one. it can be seen as omputer and the internet which able us to compute and locate different and big bulk of information in a fraction of a moment.
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