"People should pursue careers that provide financial security even if they do not enjoy the work."

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"People should pursue careers that provide financial security even if they do not enjoy the work."

"I want to be a fireman when I grow up!" A simple dream from a young child in response to the question every youngster faces at one point or another: What do you want to be when you grow up? The innocence of a child, however, protects him from the world of finances; something everyone is forced to face later on in life. And when that realization hits, what path is best for a person to take: the path that leads to a career with large financial promises, or the one that leads to a career that provides more personal satisfaction? Because contentment has so many rewards, it is better for a person ...

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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 580 350
No. of Characters: 2638 1500
No. of Different Words: 280 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.907 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.548 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.499 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.724 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.242 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5