People's behavior is largely determined by force not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Some people contend that people’s behavior is mostly determined by forces whereas others argue that people can choose how they behave. Admittedly, both ideas are equally important, and, in fact, history informs us that these two approaches are mutually exclusive. However, as far as forces is defined as a circumstance that people have no choices, that people can select their behavior is more crucial than the other idea.
The chief reason for my assertion lies in the definition of “force” in the context. If we define “force” as the situation that people cannot select by themselv...
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