Please rate my first GRE essay: A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
While it may seem right to have a uniform curriculum for all students in a nation, the pros and cons seem to outwiegh each other and so i do not totally agree with the author's statement.
Having a national curriculum for all students could help to ensure uniformity in what is being thought in all schools across the nation. In such instances both children from the rural areas and urban areas will have opportunity to learn about the same things. The benefits of the these could be seen in when students are required to take a national common entrance exam into college. A uniform curriculum wo...
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