Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

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Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

Scandals can attain resurrection in fraction of time, sometime it reveals truth that no body expected and ever anticipated in their lives. People would not notice the person which were reliable and trustworthy there were swindling money behind their back, they would not come to notice untill scandal happened. That time people came to know about bitter truth. So I support this statement and I will justify this statement by taking three examples into consideration which will explicitly claim my reasoning for my propensity towards favor of statement.

Scandals reveal shocking truth that no one ever expected. For instance, take example of IPL in india. IPL is agency which organizes match between cricket teams. Wealthy person can buy or select one team and it plays under their name in IPL. So many actors as well as actress bought different teams and they played for them in IPL. But recent results that broached by CBI(crime branch of india) of india were shocking as well as horrific. They broached that many actresses were involved in scandal because they played batting and fixing on teams, which had a deep impact on afficionado of that particular actress. They were shocked that their favorite actress was involved in Scandals and CBI even proved those claims in court. These Scandals showed a real picture which was murkier before Scandals. It gave clear picture of actresses what they did. Before Scandals, they tried to show that they were against all these Scandals that were ongoing in IPL. But real truth was different. I was fan of one of those actresses because of all paved truths that they said in public but they were nothing more than conceit.

What Scandals can do others can not do. For instance, take case of politicians in India. Recently catastrophic that happened in one state of India revealed horrific truth. This state was pilgrim and annually people in thousands come to see these God temples. More than 4000 people died in this catastrophic. Which had a deep effect on public. In aftermath of investigation, police found that this catastrophic happened because of politicians. weather forecaster declared about advent of catastrophic in past then they gave this information to political leaders. And those leaders gave it to higher priority and finally government gave a fund for activities that can stop that catastrophic by building structure which can provide bulwark from glaciers but police told that all money that government funded was digested by people in politics. They did not take it seriously and finally they made a blunder mistake which took lives of people. Police still are finding dead bodies of people and they announced till now 4000 people are dead and they are searching for more. People were shocked when they came to know about that state's chief minister was also involved in that scandal.

These two examples shows that truth revealed which was horrific as well as shocking. People who never anticipated that celebrities whom they were fan of, was nothing more than conceit . Political leader who gave bombastic speech for favor of public can do gaffe which will take a shape of catastrophic and can take lives of more than 4000 people. These true scandals shows that Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.

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Sentence: People would not notice the person which were reliable and trustworthy there were swindling money behind their back, they would not come to notice untill scandal happened.
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Sentence: These two examples shows that truth revealed which was horrific as well as shocking.
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Sentence: These true scandals shows that Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
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Sentence: People would not notice the person which were reliable and trustworthy there were swindling money behind their back, they would not come to notice untill scandal happened.
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