So much new complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the presence

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So much new complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the presence

The author asserts that looking back for an understanding in the past provides little guidance for living in the presence. Past told both the positive and negative of one's life.So accordingly one have to decide whether in a particular stituation he has to follow the past or avoid the the doing in past. If you had done a mistake in past so make sure not done that mistake in the furture.

Further,to make the issue crystal clear by taking the example of syllabus adopted by the school at any part of the world, history is included as a subject. History is taught in the school because to learn the past, to adopt the props and avoid the cons. Basically History gives the direction for the furture inventions and guideliness.

Coming to the field of the bussiness,bussiness can be proliferated by looking in its past and make changes accordingly.For example, apple,which is known for its innovation, Steve jobs make iphone 3, iphone 4,iphone 5,etc. Each model is upgrated by looking its past version. The innovation comes because of the understanding of the past.

Not only in the field of the bussiness,past is taken into consideration by the politians. George Washington is the role model for all the politician,the principals followed by him is followed by the politicians of the present generation. As in Eastern countries the role model is Indra Gandhi and Pandit Jawaharlal Nehru.

Concluding, every phenomenon, it is clear that past gives the guideliness for the better furture or present.

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Sentence: Past told both the positive and negative of one's life.So accordingly one have to decide whether in a particular stituation he has to follow the past or avoid the the doing in past.
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Sentence: Past told both the positive and negative of one's life.So accordingly one have to decide whether in a particular stituation he has to follow the past or avoid the the doing in past.
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Sentence: If you had done a mistake in past so make sure not done that mistake in the furture.
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Sentence: Basically History gives the direction for the furture inventions and guideliness.
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Sentence: Coming to the field of the bussiness,bussiness can be proliferated by looking in its past and make changes accordingly.For example, apple,which is known for its innovation, Steve jobs make iphone 3, iphone 4,iphone 5,etc. Each model is upgrated by looking its past version.
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Sentence: Not only in the field of the bussiness,past is taken into consideration by the politians.
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Sentence: Concluding, every phenomenon, it is clear that past gives the guideliness for the better furture or present.
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