Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
food, cloth, shelter are basic need of the men.In same way, art is also basic need of men to embellish life and make it beautiful. After long working hour, If we listen some music, then we get relaxed.we need something that will relax, give relief or relent us, after we get tired,stressed, this work is done by art.Art is integral part of life. It is our responsibility to flourish the art. Government funding are necessary so that art can flourish and be available to all. If people are happy then that will be beneficial for government.
In some fields of art there is less profit compared to other fields. Many times private companies are not interested to invest in such low profit field. Government is one who invest in it and its government's onus to fund such art and artists so that this type of arts may flourish and available to all people. If private companies invest then entrance fees of exhibition of such art will be more as compared to government.People will miss opportunity to enjoy art.
Last week there was exhibition of sculpture made from coins. The sculptures were prominent, alluring but few people were there for exhibition though entry fee was affordable. Because of this point of view of people funding for artist is necessary. Many artist don't have basic requisite for their art.Artist spend his life for art, to please people and Many artist have to live like destitute,that will be tragedy and failure of nation. That's why funding is necessary for art.
Government rules are strict they are not flexible, more there is lot of paper work. In order to get funding from government artist have compromise with his art. That is main reason for opposition to funding. Its true, that because of these government rules integrity of art is threatened. If government rules are flexible then this problem will not occur.
So funding for art is necessary only thing that government have to do is make Rules more flexible for getting funding, so that rules cant threaten the integrity of art.
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Sentence: Government is one who invest in it and its government's onus to fund such art and artists so that this type of arts may flourish and available to all people.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to fund and such
Sentence: Many artist don't have basic requisite for their art.Artist spend his life for art, to please people and Many artist have to live like destitute,that will be tragedy and failure of nation.
Description: The word don is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to don
Description: The fragment Artist spend his is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spend with verb, past tense
Sentence: So funding for art is necessary only thing that government have to do is make Rules more flexible for getting funding, so that rules cant threaten the integrity of art.
Description: The fragment is necessary only is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace necessary with adverb
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and make
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