Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
The Biggest change in worlds now days to innovation of new technology. Every day in new thing, new technology know to people. Which is helps to people as well as hole worls also. So i completely agree new technology helps people in there works. And new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
Before decade we use letter to send one postal address to another postal address to communicate with other. It takes long three to four days. But new thing grew up like mobile and email we can easy communicate with people with in few sec. Mobile phone is one of giant innovation in the technology. Which help for people in many ways. For example before mobile we have call by STD and PCO phone it call rate also and services charge is too much, but now mobile brings cheaper and local call rate with in half ruppes. So now days no need wait to send or receive message from long distances. Mobile now day also provide internet technology. Which best thing offer by cell phone. Like 2g and 3g free voice call, video call brings proximity with in people.
One of best change now days in world in Internet technology. Internet bring life much easy. There several of option on internet which can easy to communicate for long distances. Example ramesh is my brothers who study at UAE long distances from my home. While call him from cell phone or ISD call which take lot of money. But by internet application like skype, gtalk help me free calling and chat for long hours and free of cost. In multinational company video conferences meeting which also help for to grow and flourish there business. All such type of technology easy to people to communicate.
There are various type of other technology also help to communicate. Such as email, fax, cell phone application. In most of company no one communicate with talk and all. All can easy send mail and take decision of there works. Also fax machine help so send document one city to other city easy in short times. Also what aaps chat application it easy for student and teeneger keep always chat with there friends. Technology helps in lot of factor in human life. But some time it harmful also. Ex we use cell phone for calling but ray which fall from mobile antenna it cause cancer. Also some mental disturbances due to lot of use of mobile phone. Call on phone and chat human writing and thinking habits decline.
There are always two side of coins. Which one we have take it personal decisions. But take above points consider now days life becomes so dispatch. In such condition it important to send message as early as possible so finally we conclude that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
Sentence: The Biggest change in worlds now days to innovation of new technology.
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Sentence: Every day in new thing, new technology know to people.
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Sentence: Mobile now day also provide internet technology.
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Sentence: Internet bring life much easy.
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Sentence: While call him from cell phone or ISD call which take lot of money.
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Sentence: But some time it harmful also.
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Sentence: Ex we use cell phone for calling but ray which fall from mobile antenna it cause cancer.
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Sentence: Which one we have take it personal decisions.
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Sentence: In such condition it important to send message as early as possible so finally we conclude that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
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