source of innovation,whether it depends on individuals or a group
whether it is an individual or a group of people who brings about true innovation depends on what kind of innovation it is.we cant claim that it is always an individual stimulation leading to an innovation.
The chief reason for my view is that innovation differs from invention in that invention is a new idea created by an individual and innovation is improvements added to innovation. For instance, Ben Franklin invented electricity benefitting his personal experiences and endeavors and Thomas Edison invented lamp but, we dont know who innovated car lamps, projectors or fluorescence lamps. we cant ascribe this innovations to only one individual.Moreover, there are lots of innovations we take advantage in our daily lives without knowing their real creators.Finally, it is clear that claiming that innovations were always maden by a specific person is untenable.
it is also possible for someone to make any innovation benefitting earlier inventions individually.Moreover, An indivdual may not need someone else to improve previously invented matter or subject. Specifically, Isac Newton summarized all of the findings of all great scientists before him, suc as Galileo, Copernicus and Kepler and innovated a new theory describing universal gravitation and the three laws of motion. Finally, it directly shows that a specific individual may cause to make amendments and improve previous inventions.
in sum, i concur that some may claim every innovation is a source of individual stimulation, however, there are lots of innovations which are created by a group of people. On the whole, it cant be cleary defined whether it is individual or group stimulation that brought about innovations.
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Sentence: For instance, Ben Franklin invented electricity benefitting his personal experiences and endeavors and Thomas Edison invented lamp but, we dont know who innovated car lamps, projectors or fluorescence lamps. we cant ascribe this innovations to only one individual.Moreover, there are lots of innovations we take advantage in our daily lives without knowing their real creators.Finally, it is clear that claiming that innovations were always maden by a specific person is untenable.
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Sentence: For instance, Ben Franklin invented electricity benefitting his personal experiences and endeavors and Thomas Edison invented lamp but, we dont know who innovated car lamps, projectors or fluorescence lamps. we cant ascribe this innovations to only one individual.Moreover, there are lots of innovations we take advantage in our daily lives without knowing their real creators.Finally, it is clear that claiming that innovations were always maden by a specific person is untenable.
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