success is the main goal of every human being. success is not only a single word which particularly attached to a specific groups of tasks.it can be related to any field in existence. everyone want to be a successful person in his/her profession, and doing best whatever one can do.
there is not a proved statement to get success, every field have its own requirement, its own strategies or plans to achieve success. in some fields you have to take risks to get success like Research, in science research first you have to choose your project,and you have to work on it, when the results will come, then you come to know about that project's success. on the other side first you have to make some strategies or plans carefully to achieve your goals.like if you are starting your own business, then first you will collect information about that business in which you are interested, you will chose an apt location or platform to start that business.
so according to me risks and careful plans and strategies are complementary to each other. success depends on both. because if you will not take any risk then you cannot achieve success in your life, when a new life comes in this World, then a mother always take a risk for her life to give birth a new life. if a mother will scared of it, then the life cycle will stop here. a toddler always try to walk by himself, and in this process many times he fall down,but he tries and at the end he can walk by his efforts.
so to learn something or to achieve success in a desired field one should have to take risks, and have to make some strategies.
Sentence: Everyone want to be a successful person in his/her profession, and doing best whatever one can do.
Description: The fragment Everyone want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: If a mother will scared of it, then the life cycle will stop here.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to will and scared
Sentence: A toddler always try to walk by himself, and in this process many times he fall down, but he tries and at the end he can walk by his efforts.
Description: The fragment he fall down is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace fall with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 298 350
No. of Characters: 1271 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.265 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.272 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 68 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.517 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.552 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5