The surest indicator of a great nation is represented by the general welfare of its people.

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The surest indicator of a great nation is represented by the general welfare of its people.

A great nation has significant features that the general welfare of its people is one of them rather than just the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. There is a wide variety of nations the entire world with different kinds of life expectancy that are known as a great nation among a small group of people, while the most proportion of people from all over the world have certain definition about a great nation. They know a great nation with the level of satisfaction of its citizens and their general welfare instead of the number of its scientists and artists and their achievements.

In some countries, the political men do not pay attention to public’s demands and enforce them to involve with economical problems which will eventually lead to decreasing the level of general welfare. Little by little, people at these kinds of countries do not like their nations and even immigrate to other nations that consider public welfare. Although at every society the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists are essential, they are not enough and would not be able to represent the level of satisfaction of citizens.

Investigating the basic needs of people of any society provides them with golden opportunity to live at a peaceful and justice nation which will lead to illustrating a great nation. For instance, a small society with specific goals in order to increase the general welfare of its people is known as a great nation while a big society with different kinds of advanced technologies may not know a great nation when its people suffer from economical problems. People of first society would be able to meet their demands like having safety, security and healthcare management that are prerequisites of being welfare while the second society has luxuries only for a small group of people and prevail the majority of people from having basic needs.

As an example, Iran is a big society with different kinds of artists and scientists that have significant achievement for their countries, while the most percentage of people of this society are struggling with economical problems and suffer from injustice. It is clear that the achievements of scientists of this country could not make contribution to present a great nation when majority of people live are not satisfied and have to devote most of their time at workplaces. The rate of joblessness at this country has upward trend and the most proportion of people have to work with the lowest salaries while certain artists and scientists have highest salaries and abuse from other poor people. These kinds of countries are not known as great nations because they would not be able to render the general welfare for their people.

In conclusion, one of the most important indicators of realizing a great nation among different kinds of nations is the ability of nation to satisfy its people by rendering general welfare rather than paying attention to the achievements of the rulers, artists or scientists. Implementing of justice among the people of a nation and provide them with the decent opportunity to meet their basic demands plays noticeable role on being a great nation.

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Sentence: It is clear that the achievements of scientists of this country could not make contribution to present a great nation when majority of people live are not satisfied and have to devote most of their time at workplaces.
Description: The fragment people live are is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace live with verb, past participle

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