Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

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Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

Teachers are considered to be the most creditable for a student's education and vice- versa, it’s the students performance which owes to the quality of the teacher. Changing scenario lead to the claim that, teachers salary should be based on the student's academic performance which is an dishonor to the teaching profession. There are many other factual aspects which can be added upon the students performance.

Firstly, a class consists of minimum of 20-30 students, and individually focusing on one, is not a part of a teacher. This eventually enables few students to score above par and few...

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Sentence: Hence, it's not only the teachers in the school who pass on the education, but even the tutors contribute to it, and in this phenomena a teacher cannot acclaimed with the salary.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and phenomena
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and acclaimed

Sentence: Furthermore, there are few schools which look upon for a part time teacher and their might be even night schools, hence this situation can make one to earn an extra amount by spending a quality time after their routine schedule.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to their and might

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