You are hereUnfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your r

Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your r


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Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The author asserts that in modern society, an appealing image is more desired than the reality or truth behind that image. In my opinion, it is not always necessary that people reflect a different image primarily to manipulate society, but sometimes their profession places such demands on them.

Many movie actors try to build their image to gain popularity among the masses. In reality, they might have a completely different personality from the one projected on the public platform. Fame and success behooves many TV personalities to become extrovert and gregarious, as their profession demands them to be prepossessing to the masses. In reality, these same people might be completel ...

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Sentence: They need to project themselves as being sublime and affable personalities, so that public support is receieved and consequently it increase their chances of winning election.
Description: The fragment it increase their is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace increase with verb, past tense

Sentence: However, if a person has build a image for the purpose of decieving society, then such an outlook is more harmful when the reality is revealed.
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to has and build

Sentence: They need to project themselves as being sublime and affable personalities, so that public support is receieved and consequently it increase their chances of winning election.
Error: receieved Suggestion: received

Sentence: He was an inspiration for many young people and cancer pateints, but after his reality was exposed, he became an anathema for the society and lost all the honor and support given to him by the society.
Error: pateints Suggestion: patients

Sentence: However, if a person has build a image for the purpose of decieving society, then such an outlook is more harmful when the reality is revealed.
Error: decieving Suggestion: deceiving

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