All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The author cites that all parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's school. We can say that his assertion is valid at some point of real life. This activity of parents keep them well-informed about their child's school extracurricular activities and educational progression. Thus, I advocates the author's claim.
Primarily, I support this claim, because this activity gives information about child's educational progression. Since, parents volunteer some time to their children's school, they meet their child's teachers. They can ask their teachers about their child's performance in class and his diciplin during class time. Due to this meeting, parents also come to know on which aspects of education their child lacks. This will help them to guide through particular direction. Hence, I support author's claim for better educational of children.
Secondly, I support this claim, because this meeting also help them to know other area in which their child can be expert. By this point, i want to tell that this intellectual activity between parent and school help parents to know about their child's area of interest other than education. There are many extracurricular activities which was thought in the school to student. This will help parents to understand interest which he has not reviled to his parents due to shyness. Because of this, I support author's claim.
It is true that each and every claims have two different sides. This claim is no exception to that. There are also many negative aspects of this claim. Like, some parents are not educated enough to talk with teacher. It might feel them inferior to other parents. Some other children's parents might make fun of them. So, we can say that this is drawback for claim. To lessen this, we have to resist parents who make fun of other parents. So that, they have realized their mistake and try to solve it.
At the end, I just want to conclude that parents should give some time for parents' meeting in their children's school. Because of this, they can be informed their children's interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eir child can be expert. By this point, i want to tell that this intellectual act...
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...n be informed their childrens interest.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240310077519 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.165374677003 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0568475452196 0.0880659088768 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0258397932817 0.0497285424764 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0956072351421 0.0444667217837 215% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0206718346253 0.0406280797675 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53175979633 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0516795865633 0.030933414821 167% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0801033591731 0.0997080785238 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284237726098 0.0249443105267 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129198966408 0.0148568991511 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2101.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 344.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10755813953 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348837209302 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264534883721 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15988372093 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0988372093023 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53175979633 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462209302326 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.0629125491 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.2307692308 23.380412469 57% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3741075589 59.4972553346 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8076923077 141.124799967 57% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 23.380412469 57% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.346153846154 0.674092028746 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 39.6842576029 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.2972972973 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326291532925 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100013635292 0.123202303941 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0997870875134 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.447492866741 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131837461243 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118281909676 0.161403998019 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095180933725 0.0892212321368 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398022139458 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0864546903651 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234393109419 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410183486476 0.0653680567796 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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