The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
From the statement, passionate interest can be deviated from specific field or works; any given field of study has the ideas from workaday, which means the best ideas are come from normal days or normal situation. Every study or business have purpose of achieving benefits from what it tries to get. The statement claimed is truly valuable because people who has passionate interest try to understand which is better in action, which process is uncomfortable, which results are too much headlong; indeed, they will start to change from the bottom of defect, and it eventually help to go to further purposes.
To begin with, when statement talked about passionate interest, it can be varied from skills, work, hobby, or even housework. All of passionate interests are in normal life, and people are accustomed to them; however, as they were used to being in a passionate interest, they suspect wrongdoing process. Finally, passionate interest in commonplace will transform and create a new form of ideas for efficiency. Take for instance, expert of sculpture, he has all of items that chisel stones or woods. As there are many types of trial of carve the sculpture, he would understand how to carve easily, and be a ‘pragmatic expert of sculpture’.
Secondly, when common ideas are gathered, it will expedite better and stronger ideas. Business people pursue the goal of profit of company, military service pursues defending of nation, and government people would imagine what is best for country. All of these different thoughts from different field have future goals to be glory or to be canonized because these passionate workers try to be better and developed. Although these are too generalized factors of what they are doing, these are the essential crux of diverse passionate interest.
Nevertheless, there can have best ideas from uncommon places; scientific research is sometimes encounter unpredicted circumstances. Twenty-one century has many types of unsuspected situation such as outbreaks of Zyka viruses. Scientific research tries to solve the problem with sudden encountered situation. This anomaly is sometimes affect to make best idea to overcome, but it is rare case of having the idea.
In conclusion, passionate interest in commonplace things is come up with better idea, it has been better ideas of all times, people who are passionate worker change the value of work in order to keep thinking about benefit, and many times of trials will help for better efficiency will go further, better, and stronger ideas will be risen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...the bottom of defect, and it eventually help to go to further purposes. To begin...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...e interest. Nevertheless, there can have best ideas from uncommon places; scientific ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...ed situation. This anomaly is sometimes affect to make best idea to overcome, but it i...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...on. This anomaly is sometimes affect to make best idea to overcome, but it is rare case o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23786407767 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80449795596 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51213592233 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3588138599 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.941176471 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34533823541 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108511805507 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093456753032 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194942894063 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493477865753 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.