A defining character of human is that how they balance cooperation and competition. In the first glance, cooperation seems like a more positive word than competition, which always gives us stress and anxiety. However, due to the controversial nature of this question, there is not a general arguement on this iusse. I am, personally, to a great extent against the statement above for the following reasons.
For one thing, competition is a natural drive behind the development of our society. Image that if there had not been the competition between American and Suviet, human would not have stepped their feet on the surface of the Moon. What's more, this competition bring us another great invention, the Internet, without which we could not image what our life would be today. Although competitions, like cold world, may not leave us a good impression, but we have to admit that they make a great difference in our life, and in the history in human.
For another, a sense of competition is dispensable in our personal development. Living in a modern society with great diversity, we cannot expect consensus and agreement in many situations. In these cases, sense and skills of competition will allow us to express our demands and thoughts, instead of being ignored. An extreme example is that, in World War II, it was impossible for us to reach agreement with Nazi. And the right thing to do was not stepping back and being nice but to step forward and fight for truth and humanity, which only could be done with a sense of competition.
However, what I alluded to above dose not draw the whole picture. Alongisde with the vitality of the sense of comptition, indisputable, it will cause unnecessary confilcition if we do not treat it properly. In addtion, sense of cooperation is another important driving force in huamn development. Without cooperation, we would not be able to slow down the global warming and save our planet. Without cooperation, we would not be able to share wisdom and explore the truth in fields of science. Without cooperation, we would not be able to prevent starvation and diseases all over the world.
For the reasons above, sense of competition and cooperation, are not exclusive and eqaully important to human society. What we should do is to treat the relateship properly and citically instead of abandoning one of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, for one thing, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 12.9106741573 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.959697733 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86269352955 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518891687657 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2975764769 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7619047619 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138765331066 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457246178359 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417470463036 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848518628723 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422249029499 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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