The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
he issue statement says that instilling a sense of cooperation but not competition is the best way to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields. Although competition is also very necessary in contemporary world but cooperation is very much essential in every field. So, i adhere to this statement and reasons for my adherence are : Firstly, In cooperation the individual's energy is converted into synergy. Secondly, ideas can be shared among those who are cooperating with one-another. Lastly, competition is deadly and has very disdavantages. The reasons of my adherence along with epitomes are limned below :
Firstly, in cooperation where the people work collectively, each person try to cooperate with another, as a result the individual's energy is converted to the group synergy i.e. collective effort. So, it saves a lot of time as well as money. When the efforts are collective each person will mutually cooperate with the other one, as a result no one will try to cut the throat of fellow colleague, so it will be very benficial for the government or any industry as whole. The company will be very lucrative where there is cooperation among the colleagues. They will work as a team and will be more successfull than those who work singly. So, there is a need to instill the habit of cooperating rather than competiting with one another..
Secondly, when there is cooperation we have the chance to gain the advantages from the other government, industries or companies, they will share their agenda of success with us, we can learn the new ideology from them. Moreover, they will share the secret of succes with us, as a result we can apply that agenda in our company and there are equal chance of success in our company too. Also, when there is cooperation among the governments, there will be chances that the new bill or policy will be passed without any contradiction or opposition from the rival parties, so it will be very benficial for the pelebians of the nation.
Last but not the least, as in the contemporary world, we teach our children to compete with other, even starting from the Kindergarten to the school then to the college and even on job too. There is a neck throat competition all around us in every field. But the thing is we forgot to teach our children that keep this competition healthy. But contadictory to this statement, there is a neck throat competiotion as result a person is willing to do anything they can in order to get the advantage over the other person. Even nations are competiting to have more and more nuclear powers, which will be very detrimental for the mankind in the long run Corruption is increasing. People are becoming cad and venal.So, cooperation is needed rather than the competition.
So, in nutshell i would conclude that along with healthy competition there is a need to have cooperation among people. So, i stand with the statement that instilling a sense of cooperation among the people will prepare them best for leadership im government or in any other field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93486590038 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85676568939 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427203065134 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1690634608 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203976191286 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074646384293 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124870206748 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149876888624 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100450092344 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.