The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Essay topics: The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

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In this period of globalization person could be good in industry or government or other field by cooperation but competition made them better. I disagree to author's claim that the best way to prepare its young people for leadership in industry or government or other field is by instilling them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

To begin with, in society when children were lived, cooperation was necessary but not sufficient. Every children have to have a sense of cooperation otherwise they could not develop themselves. But not to depended upon it. If there was no competitor then how could you judge whether a child was sharp or dull. Competition made people smarter, enthusiastic and more alive. It carried out the best in the person. For instance, there was no examination in the education system than there was no competition in that. Then all the student would learned the subject and go home. Do you believe such education system would ever produced a better student or youth for country?Competition made student more smarter than they were. It provide the opportunity to did the best.

In addition, in industry there was just cooperation, then nothing new or innovative would produced or made. If there was a tough competition to survive then every one tried to did something good. In globalization there was a tough competition in every field and there was only one way to survive in this atmosphere was to done the best of you. Otherwise there was no room for a average person in this environment.

from other perspective, cooperation would need to every person who lived on this earth. Without it no one was able to made a better way. For instance, if a person was come to a unknown city to for job and without cooperation he was not able to manage in that environment. He had very rough time with out cooperation in business.

Hence conclude that, cooperation made a person to be a good human being but the competition crystallize them. And produced a smart youth for the nation.

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But not to depended upon it
But not to depend upon it

Then all the student would learned the subject
Then all the students would learn the subjects

such education system would ever produced a better student
such education system would ever produce a better student

It provide the opportunity to did the best.
It provides the opportunity to do the best.

innovative would produced or made.
innovative would be produced or made.

was able to made a better way.
was able to make a better way.

if a person was come to a unknown city
if a person came to a unknown city

but the competition crystallize them.
but the competition crystallizes them.

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