Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The author of the issue claims that men and women as heroes or role models can represent better than any others the hallmarks of a given society. He further reasons that role models and heroes are able to determine the highest level of every society. Personally, I strongly advocate the rationale behind both the claim and the reason.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that men and women are the part of the culture and civilization of every particular society all around the world. Indeed, there are vast majorities of factors that can influence societies drastically. As a matter fact, in order to recognize every single facet of every society we should take history into consideration because we all know that many aspects such as heroes have played a key role in the history of nations. As far as I am concerned, there were many influential people in the globe with different nationality, which have lived in different eras and made an effort in various realm such as politic, economic, and so forth. In this case, their contribution transmitted generation to generation and now they are symbol of even culture for their society. Arguably, men and women of every period consist every single facet of the society and next generation can take advantages and identify character of their own nation by choosing previous people as heroes.
Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that people in different society have their own living condition. Indeed, the features of every nation largely depend on culture and civilization owing to the fact that myriads of men and women from past generation are symbol of civilization. It goes without saying that culture is the main character of every given society and if people do not pay attention to the custom and tradition, they will not be able to understand the hallmarks of not only their society but also themselves. Actually, the characters of all societies such as the way of talking, behaving, wearing, education, government and so forth, are the character of people, which not until people choose men and women of past time as heroes or role models can the society flourish.
As far as the reason is concerned, it should be pointed out that heroes and role models are of the two utmost important characters that have had significant contribution in every society and patronize society to be known by their characteristics. For example, Cyrus, king of the Persia had created the most magnificent empire in the world and expand peace, tranquility, human rights and so on, in his era. Today, his efforts transmit generation to generation and vast majorities of people in Iran choose him as role model. In this case, all people around the globe can better become familiar with the Iran's' society and its people.
Having scrutinized both the claim and reason I reiterate that heroes and role models play a significant role in understanding the hallmarks of any society. In fact, heroes and role models are the symbol of culture and civilization that consist the most important part of the every country. In addition, they generation to generation transmit their features, which is the fundamental part of every society and people from all around the globe can realize the main character of nations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 730, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ot until people choose men and women of past time as heroes or role models can the societ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287603305785 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.114049586777 0.157235817809 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0743801652893 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0429752066116 0.0497285424764 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0396694214876 0.0444667217837 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138842975207 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0297520661157 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74264469752 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148760330579 0.030933414821 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00165289256198 0.0016655270985 99% => OK
Determiners: 0.105785123967 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165289256198 0.0249443105267 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132231404959 0.0148568991511 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3284.0 2732.02544248 120% => OK
No of words: 547.0 452.878318584 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00365630713 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83611736076 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372943327239 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246800731261 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171846435101 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135283363803 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74264469752 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 219.290929204 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.420475319927 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.961180274 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.35 23.380412469 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.286489845 59.4972553346 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.2 141.124799967 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.35 23.380412469 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 52.0300731261 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.31932773109 1.64882698954 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.642069047272 0.391690518653 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133506581891 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0706403318733 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.591389196218 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149517758537 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.298165760319 0.161403998019 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127986000182 0.0892212321368 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.543643811953 0.385218514788 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0704608607631 0.0692045440612 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.521281683853 0.275328986314 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709246941091 0.0653680567796 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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