Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Heroes and role models are in every segment of society that is we love them in politics ,cinemas ,sports ,socials works. Heroes represents what are the potentials we are expecting from the surrounding we live in. We praise those who have benevolent motives and not those who are damaging the society. Role models are the one we look upon ,who inspires us to become like them because role models have set examples where they have achieved heights in their respective career.
From the early childhood we develop our field of interest and we got fascinated by heroes of those fields , it could be an astronaut ,scientist, doctor ,engineer , it can be anything . What matters the most is that we have this predilection because we see our role model ,observe them ,follow them . Growth of a child has a important part in their life . we love movies as we see our favorite actor justifying the role in the movie and deep inside we felt that we can also do it.we love them ,applaud them ,reverent them because this is our reflection of what we would love to do.consider an another example we love barack obama , neil armstrong , james bond , mark juckerburg . they are the one who have made changes in the society , they are inexorable doing splendidly best for their work and that is why we admire them so much.
A person's character can be judged by things he is interested in or the activities he is indulged with. There are all kinds of malicious influences as well and we can see them in form of terrorism, militants ,dictatorship , treacherous people But we are not allowing to get under our skin . we had always fought back to negativity , traitor , and menace to society. This represents we are in appose to detrimental influence. Only a part of population are involved in noxious activities.
We can conclude that our role models are reflection of what we are . We have always worshiped them and cheered for them as they bought changes for the benefits of us and society or us. field of entertainment where they made us smile , field of science where they have enlightened us with true knowledge , field of technology where they made our life easier with new inventions . They have always endeavor and gave us the happiness and fulfilled what we look for and we are like.
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...on of what we would love to do.consider an another example we love barack obama , neil armstrong ,...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203619909502 0.238963963785 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.196832579186 0.154291517835 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0339366515837 0.0886310499679 38% => More adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0429864253394 0.0506014161523 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.14479638009 0.0449626384858 322% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108597285068 0.123526278965 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0429864253394 0.0379742944744 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65645690442 2.82910677849 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0135746606335 0.0316879551592 43% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0633484162896 0.0950106342287 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0158371040724 0.0245489744465 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0339366515837 0.0157978311181 215% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2289.0 2899.98275862 79% => OK
No of words: 414.0 478.390804598 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52898550725 6.0591788892 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.65681771538 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.280193236715 0.369966551584 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212560386473 0.285172536893 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159420289855 0.207245337619 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.136322040163 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65645690442 2.82910677849 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 234.298850575 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475845410628 0.492565540709 97% => OK
Word variations: 51.8476861473 56.8184620615 91% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 21.1264367816 85% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.7468607788 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3522506626 62.0618507366 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 143.81877709 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.7468607788 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.728815259664 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 7.71264367816 493% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.2560386473 52.2641144681 85% => OK
Elegance: 0.923529411765 1.64547068916 56% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30371366117 0.39480681544 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0928939451174 0.11556216369 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0525308394058 0.0736162880345 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520330326323 0.531340600358 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141610055182 0.15197228837 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133483007815 0.158818324754 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536446849492 0.0851127212816 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377402911875 0.388921930462 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0985138705119 0.0677916285025 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232379520315 0.28015025965 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455158697685 0.0610219844235 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.8591954023 120% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30459770115 38% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.96264367816 60% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.10632183908 123% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.93390804598 51% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 15.0862068966 86% => OK
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Rates: 54.1666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.25 Out of 6