College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
The choice of field of study for a college student depends mainly on two factors : first one is their interest i.e. in which stream they want to pursue their careers and the second one is money. Generally most of people go with the latter option i.e. money as they think money is their utmost priority so they pursue their careers only in that field in which they think their is plenty of job options but for me one shouldn't go with the latter option instead they should try to go in that field in which they have interest. it is due to the following reasons :-
As there is a saying that : Jobs fill your pocket but interests or adventures fill your heart and the ultimate desire for a man is self-satisfaction and one can only be satisfied when his heart and soul is satisfied. for instance : In the last decade their are plenty of job opportunities in the banking sector so most of students are opting for commerce to pursue their careers in the banking sector to earn a lot of money, without any interest they join the banking jobs. As a result they have to spend their whole life in a small cubicle of the office and the ultimate result is anxiety, frustrations, physical and mental illness etc. Even there is emergence of difference between him and their families and sometimes the result is even direr.
Another reason is you can't foresee the future. There are jobs now it doesn't mean it will always remain the same. For example take the case of engineering. There were plenty of job opportunities few years back in this sector but the scenario is totally different in recent times and most of the college students who opted non-medical and pursued their careers in this stream are unemployed now.
Another reason is when you go in opposite direction to the interests their is great chances of failure, one doesn't pay any heed to the information and he maybe sacked too by the company. Work you do without any interest always go into the vain.
So at last I would like to say that as you can't see the future and also the job opportunities that they will b e their for you in the future or not so always go with your interests as the ultimate desire for a man is self satisfaction and the self can only be satisfied when you go with your interests rather than being a money-minded person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... and the second one is money. Generally most of people go with the latter option i.e. money as...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... only in that field in which they think their is plenty of job options but for me one...
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Suggestion: shouldn't
...is plenty of job options but for me one shouldnt go with the latter option instead they ...
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Suggestion: It
...that field in which they have interest. it is due to the following reasons :- As ...
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Suggestion: For
...d when his heart and soul is satisfied. for instance : In the last decade their are...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...fied. for instance : In the last decade their are plenty of job opportunities in the ...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
... opportunities in the banking sector so most of students are opting for commerce to pursue their...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t is even direr. Another reason is you cant foresee the future. There are jobs now ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...resee the future. There are jobs now it doesnt mean it will always remain the same. Fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... in opposite direction to the interests their is great chances of failure, one doesnt...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... their is great chances of failure, one doesnt pay any heed to the information and he ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...at last I would like to say that as you cant see the future and also the job opportu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.495215311 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44337158217 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456937799043 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.512700695 60.3974514979 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.538461538 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1538461538 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200586386825 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666006603003 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777351678771 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102412993855 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820598101009 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.8971910112 219% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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