Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In today's life, Mostly profession spend a huge amount of time in the lab isolated by their colleges and other professors. However, mentalist and other sociologist advise people to spend their time in university for teaching to broaden their horizon and educate new students and communicate with a fresh mind.
Firstly, when people spend less time in the lab he can fresh his mood and think about the problem from outside. Sometimes the neglect issue help to solve the huge problem. For instant "Albert Aisha in" spend tow hours a day in the laboratory and he never has a routine place to seat also he always encourage his student and friend to do the same thing. He believes that by choosing the save spot to seat, after a week your brain will not work properly. so changing seat help to him to broaden his horizon.
secondly, we should always think about the new generation, the teacher should teach their student and show them the best way of achieving their dream. since everybody has a responsibility towards the young, this lead us to spend our time to teach time what we learn. For example, about two to tree hours in a week need to teach children new skills, However this different from children to children and also it relate to their IQ, age, and cruise.
Thirdly, spending outside help to fresh the mind, it is a known fact that everybody agrees with this. People in the leisure time go to leisure center go picnic with family or even go abroad to see to sightseeing. since these activities help them to relax and fresh their mind and ready for work.
Nevertheless, most researchers believe that spending time outside of their lab is wasting their precious time. So they're reluctant to do this job for these teacher authorities develop a new way of communication such as E-commerce. To save their time and help the community to develop.
In conclusion, Being outside the regular workplace help the student develop their think out of the box, and fresh teaching skills. because of these fact faculty should force to spend their free time far from their regular timetable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'broadening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: broadening
...d their time in university for teaching to broaden their horizon and educate new students ...
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Suggestion:
... For instant 'Albert Aisha in' spend tow hours a day in the laboratory ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
... a routine place to seat also he always encourage his student and friend to do the same t...
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Suggestion: So
...week your brain will not work properly. so changing seat help to him to broaden hi...
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Suggestion: Secondly
... help to him to broaden his horizon. secondly, we should always think about the new g...
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Suggestion: Since
... the best way of achieving their dream. since everybody has a responsibility towards ...
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Message: Did you mean 'relates'?
Suggestion: relates
...t from children to children and also it relate to their IQ, age, and cruise. Thirdl...
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Suggestion: Since
...r even go abroad to see to sightseeing. since these activities help them to relax and...
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Suggestion: Because
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Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of the box, and fresh teaching skills. because of these fact faculty should force to s...
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Message: Did you mean 'this fact' or 'these facts'?
Suggestion: this fact; these facts
..., and fresh teaching skills. because of these fact faculty should force to spend their fre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82320441989 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4850764858 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516574585635 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2540159794 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163503129182 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056227897459 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356556712703 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913983292234 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232226040841 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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