Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the posit

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Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position

"Experience is True Knowledge" a famous quote by Sir Albert Einstien perfectly resonates the idea behind the above policy putforward by the author. Being a Lecturer myself, I am quite aware with the practical scenario. There have been certain instances where I have observed, a Professor having a good knowledge, fails to apply his knowledge to the practical world, obviously the problems is "No Practical Experience". Its quite famous saying " Theoratical and Practical are two different thing", which is true to certain extent. A scientist can only produce a ground breaking innovation, If his theoritical findings go hand in hand with practical experience.
Consider a hypothetical position, Lets say a Student X with good knowledge joins a Industry, After a fews days of his work at the Industry he realises that, what is going on in Industry is somewhat different then what he was taught at the university, whats going on in the Industry practical and goal oriented with some practical outcome, while what he has studied at the university was pedagogy oriented.Obvoiulsy he finds it difficult to cope up with the challenges of the practical Industry. A fundametal question that arises "who is to blame for this"?. Is quite understood that the professor does not have any to this problem, but a closer analysis, will obviously

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29816513761 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27792657423 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637614678899 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.388707003 60.3974514979 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.375 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0283245903506 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0128724354446 0.0831039109588 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0105394474584 0.0758088955206 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0226953021628 0.150359130593 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000579265141481 0.0667264976115 1% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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